“Just steer clear of the shed,” warned her great-aunt as the screen door slammed shut.

Walking past her father’s Outback in the driveway, she remembered what aunt Rose had told her and stopped just short of the screen door. What was in the shed to steer clear of? Before she could talk herself out of it, she moved with quiet speed down the porch steps, along the side of the house, and around to the back yard.
The shed looked ancient, with peeling paint exposing the rotten wood beneath. Below its only window were four discarded tires, and looming above the structure was a huge oak tree, strangely bare of leaves in the middle of summer.
It’s probably just full of cousin Jared’s old stuff, like car parts, she told herself. He’d passed away when she was six years old, and her recollections of him were dim, at best. It would be cruel to go through a dead relative’s things out of boredom.
Unless Aunt Rose was keeping something else in there.
The wind kicked up, lifting her hair and causing the bare oak’s branches to brush against the side of the shed. She didn’t have to go inside to see what was in it. All she had to do was step up onto the tires and peek through the rusted window screen. What harm would there be in that?
4 comments:
Nice set up of a mystery that the doomed teenager has to investigate. Wish I knew the girl's name. Still, you've got me worried about her...
Thank you! As a Lovecraft scholar, I'm sure you know that some mysteries are better left to the imagination, both for the reader and investigator-protagonist...
Well-written, brother! A fine homage to the photo! Your work inspires me to more seriously pursue my own. I don't know of a higher compliment. You make me want to be a better writer.
Thanks, Mike; it's very kind of you to say so. All you need is more exposure, more words on the page. I've always known you were brilliant.
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